Sunday, October 25, 2015

In the Beginning - A World Without God

Chapter 31, this follows the madness of the poem and actually inspired that.





Jack watched the sleeping boy. He fingered the gun resting under his jacket and shook his head. Jack had named the boy Thomas, after the priest. That might have been his mistake. Instead of ending this madness he spoke to a child too young and too unconscious to understand.

"I should do it. I should kill you. Know why I don't?"

A soft snore was the only response.

"I'm not doing it because of the old question. If you could save the world, but to do it you had to kill one innocent child, would you kill the kid? You're supposed to say yes. I can't though."

The child rolled over, which Jack took as an invitation to explain.

"I can't because of the priest. You know what he would say? He'd say, Jack, stop being an idiot. It's not about if you can save the world, but if you should. He'd say, what kind of world is based on the death of innocence? If I only I thought about this two days ago, or even three. When he called."
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"I have cancer."

"Sorry to hear that, father. You shouldn't call me anymore. Still, your god will see you through it."

"It's past that. I'm starting to have prophetic dreams. Something big is coming."

"Something big was always coming."

"Something big for us."

"There is no us anymore."

"Shut up, you titanic ass. I called to tell you one thing."

"What's that, father?"

"Don't feel bad about what you have to do."

The line went dead before Jack could respond.
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Nicole, Jack, and the ever annoying Peter entered a museum that was supposed to house some artifact of sacrificial importance for this impending prophecy. Jack was getting tired of pretending to care about the insanity. Still, he could play muscle a little longer.

It seemed O'Reilly was done playing the role of quiet bystander though.

The priest stepped from the shadows to stand before their objective. He wore a mask of mirth to please the reaper upon his lips. Peter stepped forward but Nicole stopped him with one hand and a gentle voice.

"It is time for Jack to prove his allegiance."

Jack walked around them, wondering if this was what the priest was on about the night before. He took the hammer Nicole held out as he passed. O'Reilly nodded to him, as if in answer to his thought about the meaning of their earlier discourse.

"Make it last." Peter growled and Nicole's giggle showed approval.

Jack met the priest's eyes. He saw forgiveness and understanding there. So he went to work. He made it last. O'Reilly never screamed, but he prayed for the souls of his murderers through the intense, bone obliterating torture Jack laid upon him. It lasted long enough that the sheet covering their objective absorbed enough blood to rival the shroud of Turin. He was just about to finish the job when Nicole stayed his hand.

"I think Peter deserves some reward, let him crack the skull. Come with me."

So Jack had not had to watch the priest die. The next night though, while Peter and Nicole took the artifact to a safe deposit box, Jack absented the manse with Thomas, until then known only as the boy. He left the girl behind. The girl was too far gone. Jack hoped that rescuing Thomas would end this madness. There could be no prophecy without the son.

Right?
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Now, in his own apartment with the kidnapped child, Jack wondered how he managed to keep being a cop. He looked at the boy and shook his head. Sitting down heavily he touched his eyes and realized that, for the first time since his lover died in this room, he was crying.


"So, tell me Thomas. What kind of world are we saving when it is based on the death of a loving god?"





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